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Friday, April 1

  1. msg chart and summary message posted chart and summary Focus: Clearly identify accomplishments, figure, and relevance 10 points Content: Scholarly print…
    chart and summary
    Focus: Clearly identify accomplishments, figure, and relevance
    10 points
    Content: Scholarly printouts, use of quotes, quality of sources, detail of events
    20 points
    Organization: Clear paragraphs, Use of headings and subheadings, graphics
    5 points
    Style: Sophisticated word choice, sent. structure, and appropriate tone
    5 points
    Mechanics: Grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    5 points

    45/50
    Please use parenthetical documentation


    Social, Political, and Economic Background:
    Chart containing information on Social, Political,and Economic Background of your individual.
    Focus: facts expose s,p, e background of historic figure
    5 points
    Content: 5 facts in each of the three areas
    10 points
    Organization: information appears in a well-organized table or chart
    5 points
    Style: similar sentence structure, sophisticated word choice, appropriate tone
    5 points
    Mechanics: grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    0 points

    25/30
    Please use parenthetical documentation
    5:16 am

Thursday, March 31

  1. msg embed tech message posted embed tech Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure 20 points Content: Detailed ana…
    embed tech
    Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure
    20 points
    Content: Detailed analysis or depiction of historical figure; explains significance
    20 points
    Organization: Uses headings, outlines, or other graphic organizers; links are efficient
    20 points
    Style: Sophisticated word choice, technological skills, transitions, your creativity
    18 points
    Mechanics: Grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    14 points
    Total: 92/100
    Good use of music, video, information, and picutres. To improve, please cite your sources in your movie.
    8:11 pm
  2. msg chart message posted chart Focus: facts expose s,p, e background of historic figure 5 points Content: 5 facts in each of…
    chart
    Focus: facts expose s,p, e background of historic figure
    5 points
    Content: 5 facts in each of the three areas
    10 points
    Organization: information appears in a well-organized table or chart
    5 points
    Style: similar sentence structure, sophisticated word choice, appropriate tone
    5 points
    Mechanics: grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    0 points
    25/30- missing citations
    8:03 pm
  3. msg timeline message posted timeline Includes 5 pictures 5 points All Pictures are free from copyright violation 0 points Ti…
    timeline
    Includes 5 pictures
    5 points
    All Pictures are free from copyright violation
    0 points
    Timeline includes 12-20 events
    5 points
    Page is linked to multiple intelligence page
    5 points
    Layout is visually pleasing
    5 points
    First names of authors are at top of page
    5 points
    25/30 Be sure to cite the sources of your pictures in your timeline.
    7:55 pm
  4. msg embed tech message posted embed tech Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure 14 points Content: Detailed ana…
    embed tech
    Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure
    14 points
    Content: Detailed analysis or depiction of historical figure; explains significance
    14 points
    Organization: Uses headings, outlines, or other graphic organizers; links are efficient
    20 points
    Style: Sophisticated word choice, technological skills, transitions, your creativity
    16 points
    Mechanics: Grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    20 points
    Total: 84/100
    While your video does contain samples of his work, you have not explained their significance or even provided the titles of the art pieces. More is needed to provide an analysis of Hopper's achievements.
    7:42 pm
  5. msg embed tech message posted embed tech Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure 20 points Content: Detailed ana…
    embed tech
    Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure
    20 points
    Content: Detailed analysis or depiction of historical figure; explains significance
    20 points
    Organization: Uses headings, outlines, or other graphic organizers; links are efficient
    20 points
    Style: Sophisticated word choice, technological skills, transitions, your creativity
    18 points
    Mechanics: Grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    14 points
    Total: 92/100
    Good use of video and text to prove his significance. To improve, be sure to cite all of your sources in your film including videos, information, and pictures.
    7:36 pm
  6. msg embed tech message posted embed tech Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure 20 points Content: Detailed ana…
    embed tech
    Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure
    20 points
    Content: Detailed analysis or depiction of historical figure; explains significance
    20 points
    Organization: Uses headings, outlines, or other graphic organizers; links are efficient
    20 points
    Style: Sophisticated word choice, technological skills, transitions, your creativity
    18 points
    Mechanics: Grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    14 points
    Total: 92/100
    Good use of video and text to prove her significance. To improve, focus on proper use of punctuation in places. Also, you need to cite your sources in your video.
    7:30 pm
  7. msg embed tech message posted embed tech Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure 20 points Content: Detailed ana…
    embed tech
    Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure
    20 points
    Content: Detailed analysis or depiction of historical figure; explains significance
    20 points
    Organization: Uses headings, outlines, or other graphic organizers; links are efficient
    20 points
    Style: Sophisticated word choice, technological skills, transitions, your creativity
    18 points
    Mechanics: Grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    14 points
    Total: 92/100
    Good use of video and text to prove his significance. To improve, focus on proper use of periods, commas, and apostrophes.
    7:27 pm
  8. msg embed tech message posted embed tech Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure 20 points Content: Detailed ana…
    embed tech
    Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure
    20 points
    Content: Detailed analysis or depiction of historical figure; explains significance
    20 points
    Organization: Uses headings, outlines, or other graphic organizers; links are efficient
    20 points
    Style: Sophisticated word choice, technological skills, transitions, your creativity
    18 points
    Mechanics: Grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    14 points
    Total: 92/100
    Good use of video and text to prove his significance. To improve, focus on proper use of periods, commas, and apostrophes.
    7:26 pm
  9. msg embed tech message posted embed tech Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure 20 points Content: Detailed ana…
    embed tech
    Focus: Further develops the significance of the historical figure
    20 points
    Content: Detailed analysis or depiction of historical figure; explains significance
    20 points
    Organization: Uses headings, outlines, or other graphic organizers; links are efficient
    20 points
    Style: Sophisticated word choice, technological skills, transitions, your creativity
    18 points
    Mechanics: Grammar, punctuation, spelling, parenthetical documentation
    14 points
    Total: 92/100
    Good use of video and text to prove his significance. To improve, focus on proper use of periods, commas, and apostrophes.
    7:26 pm

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